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Submitted: October 26, 2009
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Phirsh Deluxe Circa 1972by ~WRAMIREZOIDE

Cartoons & Comics / Traditional Media / Cartoons / Mixed Media

Remember Phirsh?: [link]

Here he is much later in his span. Spot the differences and infer,

Him and IV are going to appear in a series of some sort in the future. I want these guys to be mute for the most part, conveying thought via body language.

Critique by ~RawCB May 10, 2012, 4:13:07 PM

Well in my perspective of a 40 Time award winner artist in taxidermy drawings, I believe that the tie the "Creature" is wearing, was actually made in 1987, not 1972, and also everyone knows that Purple spray paint was created in the mid 1990's. Also, it's mouth is above its eyes, it's obviously a fake photograph, it's impossible for a mouth to be that high up. Also, robotic Russians didn't wear bandanas, they wear Rice Pilaf, so i'm sorry Shawn Ramirez, but I will have to rate this a 17 out of -20, which shows that it's that bad. Other than all of those flaws, it's still pretty bad. Too bad you cannot give ratings a 3.4 star rating. - RossLikesBois.

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!Sortoftalented Feb 6, 2010

Lol. I like the jacket!

The colours are awesome and it has a bit of a psychedlic look. Nice work.

~WRAMIREZOIDE Feb 6, 2010 Professional General Artist

hur

~Vo0d00 Dec 6, 2009 Filmographer

I love the design, but I like the coloring even more. That gun is so awesome, I think I creamed my pants a little.

~WRAMIREZOIDE Dec 6, 2009 Professional General Artist

You should become a gospel singer.

~BrokenEgg Oct 30, 2009 Student Filmographer

Concept: We've been over your particular brand of insanity and the merits thereof before, so I see no reason to go over them again.

Composition: Straightforward and effective. It's a 3/4 character study, designed to show detail and demonstrate what the character looks like. You've done this, and also managed to get across some of Phirsh's personality, simply through body language.

Technique: I do miss some of the variety in line weight that your other pieces tend to display, but differing thicknesses of lines aren't always necessary (check out the ligne claire style pioneered by artists such as Hergé, the guy who came up with Tintin). The line looks a little shaky in some areas, but I think that has more to do with it having been scanned that anything else.

The colouring suits the style; bright, and the texture gives it a sense of unhinged sketchiness that matches your linework and imagination (that's a compliment, take it like one).

~WRAMIREZOIDE Nov 1, 2009 Professional General Artist

I don't like the direction my crap is taking either. I'm glad someone such as yourself is willing to suggest what I can do.

Tomorrow there will be great things.

~coulombic Oct 29, 2009 Photographer

This is so fucking awesome. I can't help but laugh at it.

~vanillachunder Oct 26, 2009

The clothes look great 8>
As do the weapanz + face

~WRAMIREZOIDE Oct 27, 2009 Professional General Artist

thank you soh mectch.

~Sirkibbles Oct 26, 2009

What's that? a new coat n' hat? a lack of a hand? Looks like somebody's been a busy one

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